Thanks Ben. I'm using real testimonials that people wrote. Once I get more I'll shorten them all and put more on there. I've only really been selling the book for a few days now, though.
It does read like your standard ad for this sort of thing. Obviously that's not my natural style, but it has been proven to work time and time again.
I'll see if I can come up with something that makes it stand out more. I think that's a great piece of advice.
Thanks!
Tynan