This is all great advice.
I agree with you about fashion. Girls should put a lot of effort into dressing right it can easily push their rating up two notches.
They should read a lot of fashion magazines and websites and take advice from well drssed friends.
They should also read the great chapter on fashion in "The Rules"
It basically says that women should dress to please men.
ie. dress sexily but not slutily and NOT try to dress fashionably
By this I mean whatever the fashion quirk of the time is for women.
This is a pet peeve of mine as I constantly see women wearing shorts and stupid giant socks/tights
I just think to myself "How can you possibly think those are attractive?"