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Random Gifts

I woke up and stumbled to the front door to check for packages. I wasn't really expecting one, but you can never be too sure. To my surprise there was a small brown box waiting on the doorstep for me. What had I ordered? I couldn't remember. I walked back inside and tore the package open.

Inside was a book and a board game. Not just any book and board game, though - they were abominations thrust in in front of my virgin eyes. The game was called A Hot Affair and the book was Penthouse: Naughty by Nature: Female Readers' Sexy Letters to Penthouse. Confused, I check the shipping address. Sure enough they weren't meant for me.

They were my neighbor's.

Critique

On Learning as I go.

So, I received my critique back on my query letter from Writer's Digest. I didn't expect it to be so thorough. The reader really ripped it apart. Apparently, I suck at writing query letters. The problem I am having is trying to sum up my 70,000 word novel in one paragraph. I need two pages at least. It's back to the drawing board to try and write a query letter that will get picked up by an agent. Wish me luck!

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