Working on a new song - the BetterThanYourBoyfriend.com theme song (try rhyming that). I have a really exciting guest artist who is going to do the last verse, but I figured it might take me a long time to get him to finish his part, so here it is for your listening pleasure : Better Than Your Boyfriend.
Feedback (negative and positive) is greatly appreciated. I listen to my songs so many times in a row that I can't tell if they're good, bad, and specifically what needs work. A few parts don't have the best enunciation, but that will be fixed later, and the end trails off because I haven't finished the verse.
Awesome song, I think there definately needs to be a video made. Maybe that will help you bring through the emotion.
Hey man, I am rarely envious of people. I consider myself blessed in many aspects, and therefor am quite content with whatever comes my way. But you sir, have jumped to the top of my green list. How can one not envy a man who buys a pool for the sole purpose of housing a penguin (fictious or otherwise). Enough about me though, let's talk about your song. Unfortuantly I'm not a fan. The concept is great, you clearly know your way around Fruityloops, but lyrically I think you're being held back. Try not to worry so much about making things rhyme and concentrate on flow. Those are my two cents man. Keep on keepin on. Peace
Great song, but the end has to be less needy. Mention the site but not the "email me" part. And then delete this post so no girls read it. :)
Tynan, I like the song -- if you decide to take Requiem_knight
up on his idea to have a female voice, i'm your girl :) As always, I like the singing-rap. Looking forward to the next one.
I listened to it last night and decided to see what my sister thought. She loved it and wanted to know if you had a cd out (I said prolly not).... Any who I like it, she liked the beat the best.
Sorry, Tie, I've been hella-busy recording my hot new album. But you'll be happy to hear that I'm finishing up my part our track right now. PopoZao! PopoZao!
Ty, good song!
My 2 cts:
I'd like to hear somewhat sharper hihats. The synth could be a bit more "evil", it now sometimes reminds me of a videogame, which I think is not what you want. You could try to put in some more uh's and ah's, that works quite well sometimes. Last and definitely not least: I'd like to hear some more variation in the beat. The beat you have is definitely good. You end the chorus by pausing the hihats, that's good. But try ending the regular 4 pattern with somethin else: more rollin hihats, a few kicks. The beat in "50 cent - How we do" is a great example I'd say. Or "Gangstarr - You know my steez" when he holds the beat.
Lastly tempo-lyrically spoken, I like what you do at 0:38 seconds. In the rest of the song I don't hear you runnin around the beat with your raps. I like that, but maybe that's personal.
Good stuff, keep it comin!
Terry and I went to Krunkaoke as usual, but things didn't quite go quite right.
I decided to change one of the verses to one of my own design. The plan is to slowly keep doing that until I'm just doing original songs and basically get to practice having a concert.
Also exciting was Terry's new rap name : T-Nugget. This allows us to replace "nigga" with "nugget" which sounds close enough that songs sound good.
Any person of curiosity and intellect, who reads and converses and studies life, will have the feeling a few times a year.
"Ah! What a fool I was! I thought life was like this, but it's actually not at all like that!"
What normally follows it?
Verse two --
"I didn't get it before, but now I've got it all figured out."